I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

Last Updated: 03.07.2025 02:59

I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?

He is always late

He doesn't like her cat

He forgets his wallet

What would you do if you found out that someone had broken into your home while you were sleeping?

He's always helping his ex

He's never available on Saturdays

He's always the last one to leave a party

What happens when you get sick in a country with universal healthcare? What's the process like?

He always cracks his knuckles.